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Some people believe that childhood is the best stage of happiness.While others believe that a person can enjoy more happiness in other stages of life? Discuss both views and give your opinion?

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According to some
people
among
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 all the ages
childhood
 is
best
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the best
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stage
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 of
life
 to be
joyfull
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joyful
,
however
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 others believe that an individual can be more cheerful in other stages of
life
.
This
 essay will
descibe
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describe
 both
the
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perspectives,
however
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 I firmly believe
with
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 the notion that
childhood
 is the best
stage
 to be happy as compared to
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other
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others
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other
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 stages of
life
. In
childhood
, one is free from all the worries and stress of the world. It is indeed the most innocent part of
ones
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life
. There is no peer pressure, no grief in
life
 and most important no stress. All they have to do is play, sleep and eat and that too taken care
by
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 the parents .
For
instance
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 a study was conducted in
Old
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an Old
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age
 home in The United Kingdom where
people
 were asked about which
stage
 of their
life
 they miss the most and
majority
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the majority
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 answered
childhood
.
On the other
hand
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 some
people
 find more happiness in
adulthood
,
middle
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middle-age
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age
 or old
age
. As in
adulthood
 an individual has more sense of freedom and is capable of exploring things. While some
people
 find happiness in their old
age
 after retirement as they have enough time for recreation and experiencing the things which they were not able to do, due to
constrain
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 of time and responsibilities. So, every
individuals
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individual's
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 perspective of living
life
 is different. For an instance, a survey was done regarding happiness in
childhood
 vs
adulthood
 in
slum
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a slum
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area
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areas
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 in Mumbai in India and more than half of the subjects told they have found more
cheerfullness
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cheerfulness
 in
life
 when they became
adoloscent
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adolescent
adolescents
 as their
childhood
 was full of hardships. . To, conclude every
stage
 of
life
 from infancy to old
age
 has its own importance. Some enjoy
childhood
where as
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whereas
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 other enjoy
adulthood
 and directly or indirectly it is influenced by the circumstances of an
individuals
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individual's
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life
.
However
 in my opinion undoubtedly
childhood
 is the most
cheerfull
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cheerful
stage
 of
life
.
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