In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

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Investigating the previous stories which happened in the building they are currently living in gradually become a fashion in many states.
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phenomenon and how people research these stories. The popularization of
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education is a critical reason
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phenomenon. As more and more citizens can acquire
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knowledge from the universities or other educational institutions, the number of citizens who are interested in historical events
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rising as well, apart from
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market and information technology, nowadays people have much more new approach to learn
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documentaries which are designed for
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education, reading novels themed on historical events.
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results in the increasing of
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fans. Once people
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fall in love with
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, it is easy to understand why they have strong
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about the
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of where they live in. There are plenty of recommended methods to investigate the
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of people’s buildings.
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, it is a good idea to invite
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who have lived in
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building before to talk
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old stories about
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building.
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, the books or articles from local libraries are
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information
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for the
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of old building’s story,
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number of residents who want to know more
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about the building they are living in, it is a good choice for local communities to organize a series of public speech aimed for popularizing the
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of the old buildings in
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city.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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