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Space Exploration: Some people think that space exploration is a waste of resources while other thinks that it is essential for the human kind to continue to explore the universe in which we live. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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In
this
 contemporary era, most developed countries has their own
space
 agencies and countinue to advance their resources. Most think that
space
exploration
 is of no use
although
 others think it necessary for humanes to explore. In my opinion,
space
 study can be an important part for fellow person to understand the significance of it. Most of the under developed countries or cities feel
space
exploration
 is just a waste of time
although
 the main reason can
people
 and local community in these areas may have tourble with other issues
that is
 much more important and can be prioritized.
For example
: Elon Musk, the world wealthiest man had advised to colonies in Mars but locals have opposed the idea by stating, money can be invested in the current planet by making it much eco-friendlier and find solutions and ways to alternatives.
On the other hand
, countries and cities that support and are excited for
space
exploration
 have always supported
this
 fact and
also
 are supporting and encouraging the
people
 take more intreast in
this
 field.
For instance
: Few years ago India launched one of the cheapest rocket into mars and the world was shocked by the outcome.
As a result
, Indian governement and other
space
 agencies had show much interest in it and
also
 are will to look into more
such
space
 research in the furture as well.
Although
, I do not agree with
people
 opposing with research in
space
 but
on the contrary
 side
space
exploration
 can help us understand the significance and need for it. To sum it up,
people
 do need to understand
space
 research can help us understand the importance of it and can
also
 lead to new
exploration
 as well but provided
this
 can only be prioritized only if all other basic necessary can be counter measured
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