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Writing Samples
Band 7.5

You have heard that one of your friends will be doing voluntary work at a festival. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter ask about what type of festival your friend is volunteering at and when and where it will take place ask what your friend will have to do as part of the voluntary work ask if the organisers are still looking for more volunteers and how you can apply for the work

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Dear Pat, I hope you are doing splendidly.
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 night , one of our common friends told me about your voluntary job to be initiated in a couple of days for an event. Consciously, I am extremely excited to know about the purpose and venue of the upcoming festival where you will be working as a volunteer and what you will be doing there. If you do not mind , try to share the list of tasks that all volunteers will have to perform . I can
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 be a part of your team for
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 festival if I can
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 all the requirements to have as a volunteer. I hope you will be comfortable asking the event organiser company if they require more employees as volunteers. If they still need more volunteers, please share the process of getting hired . I am eagerly looking for taking advantage of
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 great opportunity. I am waiting for your response. Yours faithfully, Saman

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coherence cohesion
Consider breaking down your ideas into clearer paragraphs for improved structure; for instance, separate your questions about the festival from your inquiries about volunteering.
task achievement
Ensure to clarify your requests by being a bit more direct, which will help the reader understand your questions better.
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The letter maintains a friendly and warm tone appropriate for communication with a friend, which contributes positively to the writing tone.
coherence cohesion
Your enthusiasm to join and support your friend's effort is clear and engaging, which adds a nice touch to your message.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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