Many people nowadays see a counselor or therapist to improve their mental health. Some feel, however, that this is unnecessary. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

In the modern era, it is generally acknowledged that visiting a

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or therapist is integral in order to

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personal mental

health

. Opinions are divided over whether it is necessary or not.

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essay will outline why they support each

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and suggest my opinion. On the one hand, as a significant number of

people

suffer from hectic schedules in contemporary society, they do not have enough time

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to

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psychological

health

unless they have physical symptoms. The public tends to neglect their mental

health

since some minor mental issues have no signs in one’s body.

Moreover

, having a conversation with a

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or healer is priceless as it is measured per time.

For example

, recent media in Korea reports that the average

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fee per

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hour is almost 100 dollars, and

therefore

many

people

give up taking

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. As the example clearly illustrates, the expensive fee of maintaining mental

health

plays a key factor in giving up managing

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psychological

health

.

On the other hand

, not only can minor mental problems bring about serious mental illnesses, but they

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also

contribute to

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syndrome, thereby leading to major physical

health

problems

such

as lethargy. A survey conducted by the Korea Nurse Institution has revealed that almost 70% of nurses have experienced burn-out syndrome as they do not have enough time to meet a

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.

Hence

,

people

should admin their mental condition in order to prevent

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serious symptom.

Furthermore

, an individual’s psychological instability affects families, friends and coworkers as well as the individual.

For instance

, if there is a one family member who has depression can spread negative

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among whole family members.

Therefore

, each person should manage his mood before he

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everyone. In conclusion, while I accept that

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can sometimes be expensive, I would say that

people

should check their mental condition often to prevent irreparable illnesses

such

as bipolar disorder or schizophrenia as once the illnesses occur, it is hard to maintain and it costs more money to treat them.