Your company has recently introduced a new work uniform. You are mostly happy with the uniform, but there is one thing that you do not like. Write a letter to your manager. In the letter say what you like about the uniform explain what you don’t you like about the uniform suggest how the uniform can be improved

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Dear Mrs Javid I am writing to inform you that I am delighted with the latest uniform which the company illustrated two weeks ago but I only have one concern with regard to

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. The uniform is well-designed.I checked its material quality and durability,so both of them are sufficient.

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,the most important thing I noticed about that was its style.The new dress looks like sports clothes,

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, I believe that it will be more comfortable.

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,I have only one trouble with respect to the attire which is its colour.I would like to point out that I have an allergy to red colour

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I will have difficulty wearing

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attire.

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,I feel very bad when I try on these clothes. I would be grateful if you could change

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colour with another one

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as black and blue or give me a uniform that has another tone. I am looking forward to receiving your response as soon as possible. Yours faithfully Malik Maliki.

malikli.malik1995Fri Nov 11 2022

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

161 words

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