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Compare the advantages and disadvantages of three of the following ways of learning a foreign language. State which you consider to be the most effective. •studying on your own •taking lessons with a private tutor •taking lessons as part of a class •taking lessons online •going to live in a country where the language is spoken

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In
this
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 contemporary world, the majority of
people
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 are pursuing to learn unknown
languages
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.
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,
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 a trend that being a bilingual or multilingual person in
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 globe.
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, the public has tried different methods for
learn
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learning
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 these unfamiliar subjects
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through
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 individual
studies
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, going to the
language
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 classes, abroad where that specific
language
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spoken
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 and so on.
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,
this
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learning
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languages
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 and what are the pros and cons
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 these means.
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 with,
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most
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the
people
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 who have exhausted in their busy lifestyle, never have
chance
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 to learn
studies
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 at the academy or the institutions. Certainly, they move to do
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 activities by themselves.
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, they are able to analyse weaknesses and make
own
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their own
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 plans to improve their skills in
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their own
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 way.
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addition
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 students have engaged with universities and colleges
for
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to
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learn
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learning
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 the overseas speeches.
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, they have space to
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 with other members
for
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to
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 develop speaking in
classroom
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the classroom
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.
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, local
people
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 have gone overseas due to
learn
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learning
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 international
languages
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. Currently, students have been trying to abroad
for
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to
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pursue
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 their higher
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.
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, they have
great
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a great
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 opportunity to sharpen their skills in that environment.
On the other hand
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, students who do
self
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self-studies
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studies
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, they would not have
opportunity
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the opportunity
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 to correct their mistakes.
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, lecturers do not try to give more attention
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 a single student in classroom activities.
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, learners would not have space to clarify their problems by
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people
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,people
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 who do not know
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language
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the language
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 in that international countries, at the
begining
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beginning
they
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apply
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face many problems in that society and sometimes they are misunderstood by others. In conclusion, when
people
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 know more
languages
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, have
reputation
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a reputation
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by
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in
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 their society
people
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 wherever they are able to get job offers in local or international nations. In my perspective, these study methods have advantages while
have
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 disadvantages too. If learners have good determination with
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a goal
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goal
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, indeed they will expertise in specific
language
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 in their lives.
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