Some people think governments should spend less money on arts and invest more in education. How far do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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there are some who believe

goverments

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governments

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ought to save money

spending

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less on

arts

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, other believe

education

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is more important and the money

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to be

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in

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. In my opinion, both

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field

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are important for people and

it

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they

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could

be benefits

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. On the one hand, some believe

arts

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have been an important

field

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of study and development for

the

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human being.

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, a benefit could be that

open

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our minds. Thanks to

the

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the humanity of the art

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arts

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humanity have found out

many

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about many

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parts of

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history since many

painting

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paintings

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in the cavern have shown us how people live

long

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time ago.

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, without

arts

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could be difficult

know

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about our history.

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, the

arquitechture

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architecture

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been created with the old art found

out

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and today many architects are inspired by the old

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blueprints

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blue prints

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.

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, many people think

arts

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is

a

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unnecessary spend for the governments.

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,

education

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is the main

field

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to learn about anything that we want to know and in many countries governments understand without

education

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could be difficult

improve

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our advance in

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the field

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field

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fields

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like technology or medicine. In my opinion,

this

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could be

mixture

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a mixture

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with

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of

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arts

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.

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, in many

universities

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,universities

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there are

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an opportunity

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opportunity

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opportunities

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to

chose

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subject

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subjects

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like painting while students are studying engineering.

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, there are governments over the world who think

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could be a

mistakes

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for students and they have to study only their career and save money

deleting

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this

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subjects in schools or universities. In conclusion, there are some that

believes

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education

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is more important than

arts

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, but in my opinion, both could be a complement to

a

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development

for

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the humanity with a lot of benefits.