Nature has a more significant impact on human adult intelligence than nurture. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Many
people
believe that nature has a lot of influence on a
person
than their
upbringing
. I completely disagree with
this
opinion and think that
education
plays a bigger role in human
life
than nature.
First
of all, I believe that nurture is
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important period in human
life
. When
people
begin to form
as
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a separate
personality
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, their
upbringing
helps them or negatively affects them, because at an early age
people
do not realize what they need, whereas
education
will determine their deeds and value for them. The period of
education
cannot be missed because after that no one will give
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and a
person
can just go with the flow of
life
.
For example
, there are a lot of
people
who have become successful thanks to their
upbringing
and they show
this
by their actions.
Secondly
,
education
affects the future of every
person
.
Education
can be very useful in the later
life
of a
person
because it is the foundation of childhood,
therefore
it can show the
upbringing
and attitude of parents. A
person
's future may not go according to plan if a
person
is ill-mannered, or a
person
can become a great
person
if his
upbringing
is good.
For example
, many
people
grew up
from
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upbringing
at home and
this
is one of the proofs that
education
affects a
person
more. To conclude, I want to say that I do not agree with the opinion of most
people
who believe that nature has
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significant impact on human adult intelligence than nurture.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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