2.Many people believe that nature plays a more significant impact on human adult intelligence, while others claim that an individual can train himself to become high-intelligent. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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nature has a significant influence on human adult intelligence

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part says that people can self-train to develop their brainpower. I agree that high intelligence or other

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of the nature, because, they can be passed by

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and

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with innate

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learn faster than others All

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are like their parents.

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means that facial features or other body features are inherited. Thinking ability or

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talent for different skills is

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passed on. For

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reason,

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often carry on the work of their parents.

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why

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of musicians often become musicians and

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of actors become actors.

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, the son of the musical genius and leader of Metallica, James Hatfield, is

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successful and recently started his own music band called Bastardane. Man learns throughout his life. So his skills and

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develop as he grows up. But some people develop faster than others as

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inborn talent. Often

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can be seen in primary school, where some

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are better at math or writing. But retarded

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may have talents for

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of activity. To summarize, any ability, including the intelligence of an individual, can be trained and possessed. But it is easier for people with a natural talent and they will have better results.

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, we inherit many of our skills from our parents. That's why I think that nature has a huge influence on us and our

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