These days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

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of people who want to become

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, particularly in secondary schools is decreasing gradually. In my view, there are several reasons for

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the problems.

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jobs in the world. Because

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teachers

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from

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, working place and environment are so noisy compared with other office jobs.

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reason is that even

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crucial and hard work, their salary is not sufficient.

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money easily.

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but not least,

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time from morning

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their family. In the conclusion, there are

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and reducing workload

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of kids for one

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These days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

Fully explain your ideas

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Many believe that it is important to protect all wild animals, while others think that it is important to protect some, not all of them. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Many small businesses are being forced to close because they cannot compete with multinational corporations. What problems does this cause, and how can those problems be solved?

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