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These days, in many countries, fewer and fewer people want to become teachers, particularly in secondary schools. What are the reasons for this, and how could the problem be solved?

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Recently years,
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 of people who want to become
teachers
, particularly in secondary schools is decreasing gradually. In my view, there are several reasons for
this
. In
this
 essay, I will mention those reasons and some
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be solve
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 the problems.
First
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 and more important reason is that
teacher
's
job
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as
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one of the
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 jobs in the world. Because
,
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teachers
 are trying to teach kids
besides
 disciplining them at
same
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 time. So,
this
job
 is required more energy and additional personal qualities,
chacters
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 and
behavers
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 from
teachers
.
In addition
, working place and environment are so noisy compared with other office jobs.
Second
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 reason is that even
they
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 are doing
most
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 crucial and hard work, their salary is not sufficient.
Therefore
, people select
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another job
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job
 than
teachers
 in order to get
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 money easily.
Last
 but not least,
teachers
 need to work for
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 time from morning
untill
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until
 evening at the school.
Thus
 they don't have free time to spend
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 their family. In the conclusion, there are
few
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be
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solve
above mentioned
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 problems.
For example
, improving
teacher
's working
condition
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 and reducing workload
such
 as
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number
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the number
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 of kids for one
teacher
.
Moreover
, enhancing their earnings and cutting back their working hours could be
best
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the best
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consideration
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considerations
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 for motivating people who are interesting
teacher's
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job
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