"prevention is better than cure". Research and treating is too costly. so it would be better to invest in preventive measure. To what extend do you agree.

There is no doubt that numerous methods to prevent disease have appeared in recent years. Some argue that it is better to spend more money to innovate in prevention rather than cure. personally,

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believe it will be useful to find a way to foresee the trouble of the body and

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completely agree with

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point of view, which can be supported by the reasons as follows. First and foremost, finding a way to detect the trouble which would become an incurable disease,including cancer or diabetes is indispensable for development of the medical science,

otherwise

, it can be deadly.

In other words

,an acute tumour would be deadly once it is detected and no more way or drug can cure it.

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, the appearance of preventive measures can detect it in advance making treating it possible. What's more, it would apparently reduce the pain of some diseases,

for example

, lung tumour, which makes patients can't breathe and pain.

On the other hand

, it is undeniable that investing in

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area may have a potential impact on the cure or treatment field,and even spend double the money on it.In

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believe that would not be a problem if we make good use of the medical research funding to realise its ultimate value.

According to

the annual report of the Australian government ,almost 70% of citizens announced that there was a solid relationship between researching reasonably and expanding. With all the points above,the conclusion can be made that it would be better to invest in preventive measures.In

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case,governments and individuals should devote sufficient funding to addressing medical research, and science workers,especially medical researchers should regulate it reasonably to avoid the misuse of funding.