some peole claim that not enough of waste from homes is recycled.they say the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.

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household recycling is becoming a discussable debate among
people
currently. Some individuals believe that
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there must be mandatory rules to enforce
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recycle their rubbish. While
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I agree with the statement, I will
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summarize some other interventions.
Firstly
, the pivotal role of recycling wastes in every house on the environment, and
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effects of that on our
next
generation because of shortage in natural resources should not be underestimated. Obviously, laws are
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of communities and the roots of building new constructive habits in citizens. Due to
this
fact, authorities should make major strides in
this
regard including making strict laws and charging offenders.
For example
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there are some digital weight scale bins that work with
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a citizens
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citizens
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to measure
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food wastes they will be fined if they produce more garbage.
Secondly
, the government should support communities which are developing knowledge in societies specifically
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youngsters about recycling.
Moreover
, charitable acts that have raised
people
's tendency to
this
eco-friendly act should be encouraged.
For instance
, there is a charitable institution in my city 'Tehran' replacing plastic
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with wheelchairs for disabled
people
.
In addition
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is responsible for allocating budgets to facilitate cycling for
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. like, providing recycling bins in every street.
Furthermore
, producing documentaries and brochures can help
people
to gain accurate information about ways of recycling in their dwellings. In conclusion,
however
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obligation will make individuals
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implement rules about recycling, there are
also
various alternatives to nurture a recycling habit in
people
. these both simultaneously will lead to less waste production and cleaner surroundings.
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