Write a letter to the local council. In your letter Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working properly Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours Suggest what should be done about the problem.

Dear Sir,

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well-considered letter regards your erroneous thought regarding the cleanliness of the neighbourhood where I live. The main issue being faced by all residents of the colony is the untimely collection of the garbage done by the cleaning staff.

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they are required to collect the rubbish at 7 am sharp, cleaners are reaching at 8:30 am.

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, the street dogs and cows are creating a big mess by throwing dirty polybags all around the houses of the people.

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such

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activity done by the animals is greatly influencing the health and hygiene of the people residing.

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, the foul smell of rotten items scattered by the dogs is increasing the breathing issues in children and old aged people. As it is said, "Cleanliness is

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to godliness" I request you to ask the workers to do their job on time.

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, regular and deep cleaning of the dustbins should

also

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be done so that they do not stink. We hold high expectations from you and hope you would immediately address

this

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utmost important matter. Yours faithfully, Sakshi

trideshvats

May 5, 2022

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