In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.
It is a common belief that young people take a
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travel
after high school and start tertiary education. The present essay shall attempt to cast light on the benefits and drawbacks of Use synonyms
this
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To begin
with, one reason why youngsters gap a Linking Words
year
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travel
is advantageous is that they can gain some experience and Use synonyms
also
save some money. Students, Linking Words
for instance
, are able to select a Linking Words
work
and holiday visa in another country like Australia to take a job and Use synonyms
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as a result
, they can accumulate life experience and simultaneously have more time to consider their own direction. Another benefit could be that they Linking Words
also
earn money to help pay for education, which is not inexpensive.
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this
trend is that employment can deviate younger students from Linking Words
further
studies. Earning money may bring in them the desire to earn only, which would make them lack interest in Linking Words
further
learning. Another drawback is that they may lose interest in their own Linking Words
culture
while travelling abroad. The new Use synonyms
culture
can attract them, thereby they would begin admiring the host country’s Use synonyms
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, as well as stop pursuing their own traditions. Use synonyms
For example
, research by Oxford University reveals that after switching off a Linking Words
year
in a western country, Asian students begin to praise the Use synonyms
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of the host country and abandon their own Use synonyms
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.
To sum up, despite the gap of a Use synonyms
year
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work
or Use synonyms
travel
between high school and university learning has some beneficial outcomes, but hindering them from Use synonyms
further
study, as well as stopping appreciating their own traditional values are negative outcomes.Linking Words
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