The system used for rubbish or garbage collection in your local area is not working properly. It is causing problems for you and your neighbours. Write a letter to the local council. In your letter Describe how the rubbish collection system is not working Explain how this is affecting you and your neighbours Suggest what should be done about the problem

Dear Sir, The reason I am writing
this
letter to you is that the current prevailing issue of not having a proper system of waste collection in our area is getting worsen the whole location. The management has totally failed to cater for
this
issue.
Firstly
, I must say here it created a lot of serious health problems for us like due to
this
garbage mosquitos are extremely producing nowadays as well as spreading smell around the area
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, on the other hand,

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on the other hand
me and my neighbours got affected with
this
by having fever, flu and cough problems. In the
last
, I would like to give you some suggestions in
this
regard, you need to change the representation of the garbage collection unit
first
and try to replace
this
person with any other immediately. I look forward to hearing from your side. Sincerely Your's XYZ
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