Universities should an accept equal numbers of male and female students in evening subject to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It is clear that there are many people
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that the same number of men and women should be accepted
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. I tend to disagree with the idea and in
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university
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and
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improving the situation of families. Undoubtedly, all people should get
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course
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based on their ability and talent.
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, it is beneficial for
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and
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.
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academic level, but
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in keeping the best level of education. Some filed of
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university
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universities
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like
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a nurse
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, need girls more than boys, if they
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based on equal gender, they would not be fair.
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this
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is more talent to the more progress of
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,
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, a woman manager that has high education and merit usually is better than a man manager is lack of Degree
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and without competence for every place
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as offices.
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idea can be important to
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living of families. Gender discrimination usually is not good in
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a community
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so
male
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males
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and
female
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females
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are equal in all of their life. Education and participation in
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programs based on the competence of individuals can be a prelude to non-discrimination in all matters of life, especially in the family.
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increase
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the
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presence of women in
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compared to today and
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better the upbringing of children because more intelligence and awareness
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, especially for mother in the family,
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the mother
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mother
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in the family often can cause to better thinking in family management and
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of children. In conclusion, on my view, the selection of
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should be based on merit; it would be unfair according to gender. It can be positive
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to be
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of
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people in
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,
university
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and family.
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