Universities should an accept equal numbers of male and female students in evening subject to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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that the same number of men and women should be accepted

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University

. I tend to disagree with the idea and in

this

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my opinion

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the

beneficial

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for

university

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universities

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and

society

and

also

improving the situation of families. Undoubtedly, all people should get

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course

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based on their ability and talent.

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, it is beneficial for

university

and

society

.

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idea will not only improve

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academic level, but

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also

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in keeping the best level of education. Some filed of

university

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like

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a nurse

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nurse

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nurses

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, need girls more than boys, if they

selected

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based on equal gender, they would not be fair.

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this

is more talent to the more progress of

society

,

for example

, a woman manager that has high education and merit usually is better than a man manager is lack of Degree

University

and without competence for every place

such

as offices.

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,

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idea can be important to

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living of families. Gender discrimination usually is not good in

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so

male

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males

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and

female

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females

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are equal in all of their life. Education and participation in

university

programs based on the competence of individuals can be a prelude to non-discrimination in all matters of life, especially in the family.

Moreover

, it will have led to

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increase

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the

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presence of women in

society

compared to today and

the

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better the upbringing of children because more intelligence and awareness

especially for

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, especially for mother in the family,

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the mother

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mother

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mothers

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in the family often can cause to better thinking in family management and

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the nurture

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of children. In conclusion, on my view, the selection of

university

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a university

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should be based on merit; it would be unfair according to gender. It can be positive

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to be

better

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circumstance

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of

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people in

society

,

university

and family.