A government has a responsibiliy to its citizens to ensure their safety. Therefore, some people think that the government should increase spending on defense but spend less on social benefits. To what extant do you agree?

There is

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not

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doubt that

authorities

have the

capibility

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capability

to take

actions

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to protect their citizens and confirm their safety.

Thus

, it is commonly believed by certain individuals that

authorities

should

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citizens support to

proctect

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protect

themselves

instead

of costing on social charities. As far as I am

concernd

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concerned

, it is necessary to

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government

goverment

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the goverment

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pay

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more interest on safety,

however

,

such

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does not

means

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to decline

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the

in-put

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input

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on social benefits. I will discuss and give my reasons below.

Firstly

, it is

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government

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goverment

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capbility

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capability

and duty to enhance

society

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safety. Spending money in the relevant industries,

such

as providing freely self-defense

courses

and advertising the defence knowledge on social media is the most efficient and quality method to solve

this

problem. During my primary school career, local

authorities

would

bought

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couples of relevant theme movies from the film companies and asked students to

cinema

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to

watched

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as

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the learning

courses

, which brought vivid memory and left deeply

imporession

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impression

for

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us.

On the other hand

, it

is not cause

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conflict between spending more on

denfense

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defence

and

spend

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less on social benefits. As both of them are

involving

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into

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the government public society

suervices

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services

schedule, they should take

a

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detail

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and clear

programe

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programme

program

to combine

such

works

instead

of choosing one and

give

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up the other. Regarding

charities

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courses

that

funded

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by local departments in the city where I live,

government

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the government

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is trying to combine the

commerical

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commercial

institutes and volunteers that design freely

courses

and

open

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to female citizens. In my view, it is a good way

for

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kill two birds with one stone, for it

is

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not only

give

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donations but

also

provides

courses

. In conclusion, it

is need

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to gain the interest

from

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of

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government

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the government

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to arise the input for society and self-

defen

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defence

, but

authorities

should make up a well-equipped

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blue print

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and

developing

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track

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.