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Some think the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them based on how much they produce and sell. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Nowadays, some
people
 believe that wages should be based on generating or selling for encouraging
people
,
this
 essay will check both views and I express my idea in the result. On the one hand, there are many
people
 that want to motivate
people
 who can receive
money
 in comparison to work they do,
in addition
, when they are producing a lot
this
 wants to lead to they gain
money
 more,
also
 when they can not produce like before they can achieve to lower
money
,
This
 can lead to them having to risk their whole lives,
furthermore
, not only the effort for more generate a product can make their anxiety but
also
 they can suffer different types of illness, as well as, they missed their calm, and in long term can lead to depression in them. 
On the other hand
, there is another part community who want to have a fixed wage, and these types of
people
 have a higher peace than previous
people
,
however
, they have a limited salary but they have not any concern about selling or producing and They know that no matter how much they produce, it has no effect on their wages, in my opinion, I prefer
this
 perspective because I think
this
 kind of job is very stable and
this
 is very important and employee can have another occupation and they sure earn
money
 similar before. in conclusion, if I want to choose one type that I mentioned before I want to choose the
second
 type is much safer than the
first
 type, and they always know have fixed
money
 and they are very healthy.
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