Some people argue that capital punishment is a brutal decision and should be abolished. Do you agree or disagree?

There is a debate about
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penalty. Some opinions believe it is a
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ruthless
verdict and it is better to be annulled ,flipped side of the coin, others think
this
is a perfect
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for the
criminals
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consequences and keeping them back from committing more crimes.
Nevertheless
, I think capital punishment is an unfair and useless way of punishing
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offenders. Primarily, taking any life
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to be a crucial action.
Death
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penalty
defined
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as a punishment in human law, but how killing a person could be
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acceptable way for informing someone who already
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passed
away.
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instead
of
this
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penalty authorities can employ offenders
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the aim of making various
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improvements
such
as hiring
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as sewage workers for free or as
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construction
workers.
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sentence can be unfair if the law
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to
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the easiest way and just kill other human being
instead
of being innovative in finding new ways to punish ruthless
criminals
.
secondly
,
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sentence may be useless if
government
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put
criminals
in the prison
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until
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of their life, because the state should treat them with
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meal
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and
a
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shelter.
This
old fashion method and spending taxpayers’ money to care for the convict for life by the state could change to exile them to the
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undiscoverd
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undiscovered
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territories and forcing them to develop that area for good. Take Britain
for instance
, which developed a huge island as a
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powerful
country in
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century by sending
criminals
to Australia and using their human resources with building a massive country. In conclusion, I am still convinced that
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sentence is a harsh and inhumane act and as
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cruelty should be discontinued. There are many better ways of punishing
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offender.
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  • capital punishment
  • deterrent
  • irreversible
  • wrongful conviction
  • moral implications
  • life imprisonment
  • societal impact
  • abolition
  • justice system
  • rehabilitation
  • ethical considerations
  • humanitarian perspectives
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