Some peole say that too much time and resources are spent on the protections of wild animmals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is evident that a considerable amount of time and money have being given

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animal conservation. While some individuals believe that it is a sort of

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, I advocate that

this

is the best way to prevent

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all species from future serious threats.

Animals

and birds play a pivotal role

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natural surroundings including maintaining the diversity of the economy and education.

First

, it is clear that the lacking of any kind of

animals

in the food chain resulting severe consequences.

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, the distinction of

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Tasmania has left a space in the nutrition chain, leading to

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significant increase in the number of Tasmania devils, and several strange illnesses for others.

Second

, due to the training purposes, it would be best if students and scholars can contemplate species

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their naked eyes once

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since real samples could remain

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in learners’

mind

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than any other means of information.

In addition

, animal preservation could benefit

human

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with some merits, from generating new medicine to innovative inventions for daily life.

Initially

, scientists have

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from the features and habits of wild

animals

, which help them to survive in a difficult

environment

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environments

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.

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, biologists have

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invested their efforts to explain why female polar bears can live without food during

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winter, and create a special medicine for

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patients. Alternatively,

technicans

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technicians

also

took some unique points in the habit of

animals

into their careful consideration, which aims to improve their products.

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is an example, the improvement of

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today are much more

relied

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on specifics of cats’ eyes

,

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because scientists have applied the ability

of seeing

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in a dark environment of cats to upgrade the quality of

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. In conclusion,

natural

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environment with wild

animals

conveys

an

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crucial role

on

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human life,

hence

governments and individuals should take

this

issue into serious protection.