Scientists and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artists. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

It is being said that the

twenthieth

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twentieth

century is the era of

technology

and science which are critical for

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community to survive, while

music

and

art

have gradually lost their importance during

this

century. I believe that

although

the vital roles that

technology

and science are playing can not be underestimated, the effects of

music

and

art

on people's lives should not be overlooked. The reasons for investing

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IT experts and

scientist

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scientists

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are many.

First

of all, today's modern lifestyle tightly depends on the internet and

technology

. One can take the example of

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gadget of

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phone which individuals can not live without anymore.

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is because the majority of human interactions which is

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integral part of

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society are being done virtually over the phone or other applications like Watsapp and Facetime.

Thus

, protecting the ones who are working in

technology

areas and adding new features to the available ones leads to

improvement

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of

humans

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lifestyles, which is valuable for societies.

Moreover

, the problems of

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a new

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era

is

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changing. A good example of it is the new virus which has affected the world

considerabley

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considerably

recently.

This

new challenge

demonestrate

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demonstrate

the importance of

scientist

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in

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society to tackle

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and protect them in the unprecedented future. Despite the above, valid points are being discussed in favour of

music

and

art

by many. They usually take the example of recent

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compulsory

isolation which could contribute to the increase of human mental diseases but

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controlled by

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of musicians and artists. By attending virtual concerts and online

art

courses many people tackle depression. Added to

this

personal aspect is the greater effects of

art

and

music

on countries.

For instance

,

art

and traditional

music

usually are a part of counties' industries.

This

means neglecting them can affect

economy

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of a country.

Besides

that, they are essential for cultures to survive.

Consequently

, people can say

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value of them is not lesser than science and

technology

. To sum up, scientist and IT experts

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an increasingly important role and advocating for them to survive is essential.

However

, I believe that musicians and artists are

also

important for communities and should be preserved at the same level.