Some people think that the main factors influencing a child's development these days are things such as television, friends and music. Others believe that the family still remains more important. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

There is no doubt people use more and more social outlets in the contemporary world. While some certain individuals think that parents obviously play a fundamental role
behind
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a
child
to get a toddler, a teenager and an adult. Others claim that social
factors
outside of the family influence
much more
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for
child
's
development
. In my opinion,
However
, I believe that the parental support for the
child
as former view values for the
child
to learn the
life
. Some people
who
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state that family interaction with the
child
for his
development
is a major requirement and significant impact
in
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a
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the
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life
in
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each
child
. He starts the
life
journey from
mother’s
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his mother’s
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womb and there are network connections with the family and he learns real
life
from them. They develop their confidence doing daily activities step by step and grab skills through interaction with family members.
For example
, who
grow
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with
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brought
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family,
that
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when the mother and the grandparents while telling the fiction stories to the
child
while he is eating or playing that he
try
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tries
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to catch the world,
therefore
his creativity and confidence
incredibly
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enhance
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with happiness. Another crucial advantage is that children learn and receive love and affection much more from family members. While he
develop
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develops
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this
important habit,
that
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he start loving himself and others as well as he
respect
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respects
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every human and
animals
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animal
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.
On the other hand
, those who argue that social
factors
such
as television, friends and music are needed for
human's
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human
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development
since
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from
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birth as
child
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a child
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learn different things from the TV shows.
For instance
, when he
watching
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watches
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children's drama, film or animal planet, he
study
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studies
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many cultures, many habitat and popular languages. Music always gives relaxation to
child's
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a child's
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life
.
Moreover
, when they have friends
that
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he learns how to mingle with different characters, team
bond
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bonds
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and put his legs for socialization and it leads to
make
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making
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independent
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an independent
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adult for the
life
. Not only that but
also
there are
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drawbacks
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draw backs
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drawbacks
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using
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to using
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above mention social
factors
if someone
use
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it
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them
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excessively and inappropriately. He might be
take
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taking
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less credit in his exams due to
addiction
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his addiction
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of
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to
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watching television and music as well as
he
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the
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influence
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influences
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irregular habits
such
as using illegal drugs once he
mix
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mixes
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with toxic friends. In conclusion,
nevertheless
, who grow among
family
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a family
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environment that the
child
develops very scientific ways with pleasure.
However
, social
factors
very
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important to consider in
to
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account for his best
life
development
. But usages of that for the
child
always need under parental guidance and supervision.
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