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Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. Do you think is a good idea or a waste of time? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant exaxples from your own knowledge or experience

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Being a student is not easy, it requires good time management skills to balance studying and social life, especially during high school. High school is a milestone of life, the upcoming career and future depend on it, as a consequence of
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 parents and students usually stress out seeking to collect grades to enroll in high-ranked universities with a better future. The point is, that the majority of the students after graduation from university, don’t work with their certificate. I have a friend who is a lawyer,
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; she is working in a restaurant serving food,
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 one of my cousins consumed five years studying engineering, and
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 she started her own business with scented candles. I mean that we are raised on finishing our studies is the only guarantee to have a brilliant future and be satisfied with our lives which is not true.
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, we spend the duration before going the college in large-scale stress and scared of losing grades. The one who decided to take a one–year gap after graduation from high school probably wants to have some rest before getting to more stress and duties. Having
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 and having fun or getting a job and exposure to the work environment is vital to give yourself the space to think about your interests and what you want to do with your life.
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, one- year is a long time, so finishing university early will give you the chance to be promoted in your career at a young age while you are still ambitious and enthusiastic. To calculate, having a year gap or not depends on your personality, if you are a person who gets stressed early and
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 confuses you or you are eager who seek to learn and evolve in their career early. .
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