You recently stayed at a hotel and you had a great time. Write a letter to the hotel. In your letter thank the manager and his staff give some particular examples of why you enjoyed your stay at the hotel so much explain that you have written a review of the hotel on a popular website for tourists You should You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, The reason I am writing

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letter to you is doe to I

really

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grateful for the good service that I receive every single time that

visits

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visit

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the hotel, the manager is an enthusiastic worker, he always gives me a smile and good treatment if I ask him something

in particular

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Moreoverover

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Moreover

his staff is an efficient team , which is something to keep in mind and appreciate.

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, I enjoy the new activities that you have in the building,

such

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as the pilates classes or the brand new asset of the hotel, the Latin bar called "La Joya", I made a lot of new friends in

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place,

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the music was astonishing. I am glad to let you know that I made a review of the hotel on a popular website for tourists,

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might help other individuals to encourage and book a room, Looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Erick Amaro

hazielrojas

Jul 3, 2025

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Coherence and Cohesion

Use clearer sentences to express your ideas.

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Task Response

Include a brief summary of what you enjoyed at the hotel.

Tone

You have a warm tone in your letter, which is very nice.

Content

You included specific examples of what you enjoyed, like the Latin bar.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

161 words

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