You have recently migrated to another country. Now write this letter to your friend to describe your present life. In your letter say.. When you have moved to this country Why you chose this country How things are now for you

Dear Anya, Hope you everything well, I am writing
this
letter
that
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to let you know I moved to Australia
last
month for my English study course. As you know, I applied
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to Universit

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Universit
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university

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in Wollongong. I am so excited to
got
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get

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student
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a student

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visa in
few
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a few

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weeks ago, I am so sorry I didn't say goodbye
with
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to

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you.Due to
limit
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limited

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time to book air
tickes
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tickets
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, as well as deal with
arrange
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arranged

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accomendation
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in
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on

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campus
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.
Unitil
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Until

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now, I have been there for 3 weeks,
everthing
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everything

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look
at
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fresh. The
wealther
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weather
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was great, and I meet some roommates from
different
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a different

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country
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countries

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, Most of them are friendly. But I still
misses
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you so much, I always
thinking
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, if you are here that would be fantastic, we can
hung
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hang

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out and study together. By the way, I have been to
the
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Bondi beach,
next
summer season, you should come there. I promise we would have a lot of fun.
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Your
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sincerely Ella
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