In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

A lot of people globally still suffer from hunger, despite major advances and changes made in food and
agriculture
.
This
has become a major concern worldwide and includes certain reasons
such
as lack of infrastructure and the unwillingness of
both
the
government
and
individuals
to partake in
agriculture
. To solve
this
problem
both
parties would have to work together. Lack of infrastructure is a major challenge in most developing nations, despite new achievements in
agriculture
, most nations do not have access to the equipment and machinery which could help boost
this
sector.
For example
, recently some modernized tractors were produced, which helped reduce the stress on labourers, making their work easier.
However
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these
equipments
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equipment
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pieces of equipment
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were too expensive for some companies and
individuals
to purchase. The unwillingness of
both
citizens and the
Government
to partake in
agriculture
is
also
on the rise. As most
government
officials are corrupt and see
this
as a way to make more money for themselves.
Individuals
on the other hand
consider
this
to be a low source of income, as little or no profit is generated from
this
.
For example
, most farmers had little profit to gain after an explosion in a refinery, caused by corrupt
government
officials.
Furthermore
, to eradicate
this
problem
a lot of work has to be done. The
government
should put certain measures in place to help
individuals
and farmers achieve realistic goals.
For example
: equipment and tools should be given to small business owners, loans and revenues are set up for those willing to partake in schemes, and
investors
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opportunities be presented to the general public. These suggestions can help encourage more people that
agriculture
can indeed solve the
problem
of hunger we face. In conclusion, after listing some reasons for hunger globally despite new advances made in
agriculture
. It can be said that for we to curb
this
problem
both
the
government
and citizens have to make a stand together, by striving to achieve the best we can.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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