In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

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A lot of people globally still suffer from hunger, despite major advances and changes made in food and
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has become a major concern worldwide and includes certain reasons
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as lack of infrastructure and the unwillingness of
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the
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and
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to partake in
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. To solve
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problem
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both
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parties would have to work together. Lack of infrastructure is a major challenge in most developing nations, despite new achievements in
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, most nations do not have access to the equipment and machinery which could help boost
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sector.
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, recently some modernized tractors were produced, which helped reduce the stress on labourers, making their work easier.
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However
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these
equipments
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equipment
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were too expensive for some companies and
individuals
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to purchase. The unwillingness of
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citizens and the
Government
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to partake in
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is
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on the rise. As most
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officials are corrupt and see
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as a way to make more money for themselves.
Individuals
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on the other hand
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consider
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to be a low source of income, as little or no profit is generated from
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.
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, most farmers had little profit to gain after an explosion in a refinery, caused by corrupt
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officials.
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, to eradicate
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problem
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a lot of work has to be done. The
government
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should put certain measures in place to help
individuals
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and farmers achieve realistic goals.
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: equipment and tools should be given to small business owners, loans and revenues are set up for those willing to partake in schemes, and
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opportunities be presented to the general public. These suggestions can help encourage more people that
agriculture
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can indeed solve the
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of hunger we face. In conclusion, after listing some reasons for hunger globally despite new advances made in
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. It can be said that for we to curb
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problem
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both
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the
government
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and citizens have to make a stand together, by striving to achieve the best we can.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inequality
  • distribution
  • access to resources
  • climate change
  • natural disasters
  • political factors
  • economic factors
  • agricultural practices
  • infrastructure
  • transportation
  • population growth
  • education
  • knowledge
  • food waste
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