Some people spend a lot of money attending cultural or sports events. Is it a good or a bad thing? Give your opinion and examples from your own experience.

Cultural and

sports

events

are mostly attended by

alot

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a lot

of folks , and by doing so they tend to invest

alot

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a lot

of their

money

.

However

, I strongly recommend the idea of spending

money

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Cultural or rather

sport

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events

because they are

source

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a source

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of

entertainment

where

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by

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people

tend

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enjoy themselves and

also

during the

events

, individuals interact with one another

hence

creating a platform for socialisation.

First

and foremost, with the current economy

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it is hard

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to

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go

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get anything for free.

This

applies as well in

entertainment

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field

where

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by

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the more one pays the more fun they have. To explain

further

, during cultural or

sports

event

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events

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they do offer various entertainments that are charged as per

individuals

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capability,

therefore

those who pay more tend to have more fun unlike those who pay less.

For instance

, a research was done by Kenyatta university students in the year 2002 and showed that culture or

sport

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activities

that many folks have paid

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lot of

money

tend

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to be more fun because they do offer various forms of

entertainment

.

Therefore

, in

oder

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order

for

people

to get more

entertainment

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they have

put

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more

efforts

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financially .

Secondly

, cultural or

sports

activities

are not only places where humans go to play games and learn more about culture but

also

create a forum for socialising.

By allocating

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money

for attending the

events

will definitely pay

of

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owing the fact that

people

will get a chance to interact during the ceremonies. To illustrate

this

, on

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22 of

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may

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2020 daily

news paper

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, there was a report by a

sclora

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sclera

that stated that 70% of human beings who attends cultural

activities

that they have financial invest

on

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end up making long term friendships.

Thus

, allocating funds for attending

sports

or cultural

celebration

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celebrations

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will

enables

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one to mingle with other folks . In conclusion, spending funds on cultural and sporting

events

should be normalised . Henceforth, I reckon it is a positive idea to invest

money

on

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cultural and sporting

activities

since the

activities

are

source

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of

entertainment

to humans and

also

during

such

events

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people

connect with both new and old friends.