Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. however, the others believe that school is the place to learn this.Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many folks believe that family should teach

children

how to be social trust,

while

others say that school is to

learn

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this

.

Although

institutes have a vital role in their education, I believe that parents have the authority to ensure offspring have a good attitude in society. In

this

paper, I will discuss both points of view and

give

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conclude the argument. On the one hand, school is one of the most popular places to give knowledge to

children

. It is not only about academic learning

such

as maths, biology or

physic

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physics

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but

also

non-academic material like attitude or discipline.

Nevertheless

, schools have limited teachers.

As a result

, they can not teach and control optimally each child.

For instance

, in a class,there are twenty students and one

supervision-teacher

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, so the lecturer can find it difficult to control each child in the class.

On the other hand

, the family is the first person in the scion's life. Every child has an emotional relationship with their relatives.

This

is because they

additionally

find their relatives when they feel happy or sad.

Hence

, the family is

more closely

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closer

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to the offspring, so they can

education

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be educated

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easily on how to be good members of society.

For example

, almost every day parents meet their

children

either in the morning or evening, and every time

their

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they

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meet can be used to ensure the offspring's attitude.

In addition

, the family have more power to

enforce

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force

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the scion to become socially responsible.

This

is because the scion has respect for their relatives, so they will follow

a

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the

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rule

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rules

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of their family. In conclusion,

however

, the academy has an essential role in

offspring's

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the offspring's

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education, I believe that the family have a duty to ensure

children

have a social obligation.

This

is because parents are closer and have more power than the academy or teachers.