You have arranged to visit a friend in England but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • explain the important event • apologise for the situation • suggest a new arrangement

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Dear Ali, I hope you and your family are well and fine. I am writing

this

letter to tell you I have to change our next Sunday visit to another day. When I reached home yesterday after talking

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, I realized that my

sister

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wedding party will

hold

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be held

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next Sunday afternoon.

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I have to be present as her only brother and her bridesmaid as well. I want to

apoligise

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apologise

from

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of my heart for changing our first rendezvous after so many years. As you already know we lost our connection several years ago and I found you by accident through social media. So, I need to have a friendly connection with me

this

time. In the

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I want to tell you that if you have free time we can change our meeting to Tuesday afternoon and we can go to a restaurant near my home and spend

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of hours together. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon. Warm regards, Khashayar

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Coherence & Cohesion

Ensure that each paragraph has a single, clear focus. While your letter addresses the necessary points, some paragraphs could be more focused for better clarity.

Task Achievement

For a higher score in task achievement, try to expand on the explanation of the important event and the inconvenience it might cause to your friend, showing more awareness of the reader’s perspective.

Grammar & Accuracy

Pay attention to spelling, grammar, and punctuation. Errors such as 'apologise' (British English) vs. 'apologize' (American English), and 'meeting' instead of 'visit' can affect the formal tone of your letter.

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2Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
0Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Grammar mistakes
 

8 paragraphs

167 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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