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Band 6.5

You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter explain where you live describe the problem give reasons why you do not want this development

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Dear Sir, I am writing
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 letter to inform you that the airport near
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my premise is under a
plan
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 of renovation which is quite unhappy for me. I am living north-west of CIAL airport nedumbassery which is under the
plan
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 of getting extended to increase the facilities to
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 up the number of flights.
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 very near to my compound which affects my livelihood and life.As I am a small farmer with a minor farming area which is
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 with the house includes my life structure.
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this
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 area which is already included in the extension
plan
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 of the airport.It will be
great
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 problem for my future survival as the only land available for me is going to
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 up by the authorities on that renovation
plan
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.I have no other income ways for my livelihood if the government took my sole property.
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 my family includes parents which are old aged too and that
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 getting
difficuities
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difficulties
 for shifting plans. I look forward a
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 response from your newspaper to publish the present
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 and make
government
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 aware of it.It will be
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 help for me. Thank you yours Faithfully Robert wilson idikkula
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