You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. You live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter explain where you live describe the problem give reasons why you do not want this development

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that the airport near
to
Change preposition
apply

It seems that preposition use may be incorrect here.

show examples
my premise is under a
plan
of renovation which is quite unhappy for me. I am living north-west of CIAL airport nedumbassery which is under the
plan
of getting extended to increase the facilities to
took
Change the form of the verb
take

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb took. Consider changing it.

show examples
up the number of flights.
Its
Replace the word
It's
It is

It appears that the possessive pronoun Its should be a contraction instead. Consider changing it.

show examples
very near to my compound which affects my livelihood and life.As I am a small farmer with a minor farming area which is
crossbonded
Correct your spelling
crossbanded

If you don’t want crossbonded to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

with the house includes my life structure.
Its
Replace the word
It's
It is

It appears that the possessive pronoun Its should be a contraction instead. Consider changing it.

show examples
this
area which is already included in the extension
plan
of the airport.It will be
great
Add an article
a great

The noun phrase great problem seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

show examples
problem for my future survival as the only land available for me is going to
took
Change the form of the verb
take

It appears that your sentence or clause uses an incorrect form of the verb took. Consider changing it.

show examples
up by the authorities on that renovation
plan
.I have no other income ways for my livelihood if the government took my sole property.
Moreover
Add a comma
,Moreover

It appears that you are missing a comma after the introductory phrase Moreover. Consider adding a comma.

show examples
my family includes parents which are old aged too and that
also
getting
difficuities
Correct your spelling
difficulties

If you don’t want difficuities to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

for shifting plans. I look forward a
possitive
Correct your spelling
positive

If you don’t want possitive to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

response from your newspaper to publish the present
senario
Correct your spelling
scenario

If you don’t want senario to be marked as misspelled in the future, you can add it to your personal dictionary.

and make
government
Add an article
the government

The noun phrase government seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

show examples
aware of it.It will be
great
Add an article
a great

The noun phrase great help seems to be missing a determiner before it. Consider adding an article.

show examples
help for me. Thank you yours Faithfully Robert wilson idikkula
Submitted by BINI K ISSAC on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Check your IELTS essays
Writing9 scans your text for all types of mistakes, from typos to sentence structure problems and beyond.
What to do next:
Look at other essays:
Need a higher score on IELTS Writing?
Instantly see mistakes you've made and learn how to avoid them.