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Some believe museums should entertain people, while others believe their purpose is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

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It is often argued that
museums
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 should educate
people
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 rather than entertain
people
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. I will discuss both views but in my opinion, I disagree that
museums
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 should only educate the public with
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interesting topics
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 as history, space, etc., rather than entertain
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.
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, many
people
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 debated that
museums
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 should be solely used for education. An Exhibition in a
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 should be able to tell visitors something that they did not know before.
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 means that the
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 must explain what is it that they are showcasing.
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 can be done in many ways. Usually, they employ guides to talk to their visitors, while some other
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 use headsets for the
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 to listen to commentary about the exhibition.
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, the exhibition can teach the
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 about important things
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 as history, science, etc.
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, a
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 can
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 be an attraction that entertains
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.
Museums
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 are, in a way
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tourist attractions, and their purpose is to showcase interesting objects and at the same time educate the
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. If the
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 only showcases "educational" content and not much interesting stuff,
people
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 may become bored.
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, if space
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 only
showcasing
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 general knowledge and not interesting stuff
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 as the engine of the rockets or
spacesuit
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spacesuits
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 used by astronauts they will not get many visitors. A
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 of
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 type needs something
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 spectacular to keep the
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 engaged. In conclusion, a
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 should be able to do two of those ; offering an important, educational subject and an enjoyable experience so that
people
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 can have fun and learn something new at the same time
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