You have recently migrated to another country. Now write this letter to your friend to describe your present life. In your letter say.. When you have moved to this country Why you chose this country How things are now for you

Hi John, How've you been? It's been a long time since we met
last
time. I hope you and your family doing well. As you know, I've been trying for two years to relocate my life to Australia to pursue my career objectives. Luckily, I have been granted citizenship three months ago, and I moved here
last
month as soon as the visa is approved. I am writing
this
letter to tell you why I am choosing Australia since you are
also
interested to migrate here.
First
, the visa process is quite fast and reliable and it does not depend on where did you come from. It is a rare opportunity in
this
kind of discrimination world.
Additionally
, the weather here is almost the same as in our country and there are numerous job vacancies that suit us.
Although
migrating to a new country is not an easy task, I believe it will be worth it at some point in the long run. I am currently working as a part-timer and getting paid more than my full-time office work there. As far as I'm concerned, it wouldn't
also
be too difficult to get a job for you. Best wishes, Tun Naung Win
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

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Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

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  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
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  • even though
  • despite

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