You recently attended a training course for your work. Your employer has asked you for your feedback on the training course. Write a letter to your employer. In your letter remind your employer what the course was about explain why the course was useful to you in your work suggest why the course may not be suitable for some of your other colleagues
Dear Manager,
I am writing an assessment for my current training programme.
When I received an email from the T&D department for new
course
training I was excited to join this
program
. The course
name was the protection against harassment of Women in Workplace
, Act 2010.
Being a female it was important for me to get knowledge from Correct article usage
the Workplace
this
. However
, harassment is affected by many women in our country. The awareness is given by this
law and what type of abusive thing can happen in our office
. Although
, it is a sensitive matter it has to give consciousness to all the ladies. This
law has also
given a right to complain at the particular forum which is set by the government. Furthermore
, it also
develops how to deal with such
types of people who are doing these abusive actions. This
program
has given me enough information that I have not learnt before. Therefore
, it can protect me from harassment or other women in office
.
It seems to me I can deliver this
course
to my office
fellows as I have received this
program
. If you allow me to give this
course
to my office
staff you will not pay any cost. As a volunteer, I can deliver this
program
to my friends so it will benefit them.
I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Yours Sincerely,Submitted by mobinadurrani43 on
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task response
Ensure that you address all parts of the task. Although you provided a general overview of the course, more specific examples of how the course was useful to your work could strengthen your response.
tone
The writing tone is somewhat informal, considering the recipient is your employer. Use a more formal tone and structure appropriate for a workplace.
greeting and closing
Your letter should start with a formal salutation targeted to the specific recipient, such as 'Dear [Employer's Name],' and close with a formal sign-off such as 'Kind regards' or 'Yours faithfully'.
coherence and cohesion
Maintain a logical structure throughout your letter, ensuring each paragraph contains a single clear idea that contributes to the overall purpose of the letter.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite