The pipe running from the solar collector to the tank is filled with an anti-freeze fluid that is heated via the sun

The sun heats the
antifreeze
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that goes through the solar collector to the
tank
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. Overall, it is a man-made process that starts with heating the
antifreeze
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with solar power and boiling another fluid with a boiler. Both heat the
water
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inside the
tank
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to be pumped up from it.
Firstly
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, the cold
antifreeze
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is going up by a pump through a tube to the solar collector and the pump is controlled by a controller. After being heated, the heated
antifreeze
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goes down in the pipe to enter the
tank
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and heat the
water
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inside the
tank
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. The cycle is repeated when the
antifreeze
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becomes cold.
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, the boiler boils a cold fluid which goes back to the
tank
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by a serpentine-like pipe to heat the
water
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in the
tank
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and the cycle is repeated as well.
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, the cold
water
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which goes to the
tank
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from the bottom becomes warm through these two ways of heating.
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, the heated
water
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in the
tank
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goes up to a pipe which is controlled by taps.

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