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Based on a line graph of fast food
consumption
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among Australian teenagers between 1975 and 2000, over a 25-year period. Overall,
consumption
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of
fish
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and
chips
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declined over the period, while pizza and hamburger
consumption
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increased. In 1975, the most popular fast food among Australian teenagers was
fish
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and
chips
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, eaten 100 times a year. That's much higher than pizza and hamburgers, which are consumed about 5 times a year.
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, there was an upward trend from 1980 to 1985, with
fish
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and
chips
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consumption
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gradually declining over a 25-year period, eventually reaching levels close to 40. Notably, teens ate the other two fast foods at much higher levels.
Consumption
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of pizza gradually increased until it surpassed that of
fish
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and
chips
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in 1990.
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it
leveled
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off from 1995 to 2000. The biggest growth was in hamburgers, where hamburger eating increased dramatically in the 1970s and 1980s, surpassing
fish
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and
chips
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in 1985. It's the same level as
fish
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and
chips
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to start with, 100 times a year.
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