Some people think computers and internet are important in children's study, but others think students can learn effectively in schools and with teachers. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
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vital key factor for every human. Wherever people have equal rights to gain knowledge and information around the world. Correct article usage
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Moreover
, nowadays, children used to do their studies via internet
because they believe Correct article usage
the internet
this
learning system has benefits for their academic works
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However
, some communities argue that great advantages by
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to
schools
and with tutors. Change preposition
in schools
This
essay will focus on these both opinions and I will elaborate my
view too.
On the one hand, currently, younger people have more access to occur digital learning methods. These computer-based study tools attain to grow our technological databases and whenever Change preposition
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As a result
, juniors have tendency
to study through e-learning premises. Add an article
a tendency
the tendency
For example
, due to Correct article usage
the pandemic
pandemic
, children did their school learning exercises through e-learning. Fix the agreement mistake
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Therefore
, this
online learning was popular among teens and they give more priority for
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rather than go
to campus.
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On the other hand
, the majority of the population think school based
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school-based
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the child
a child
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In addition
, students who are in primary schools , could not able to understand subject matters without teacher's
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Furthermore
, wherever youngsters have opportunity
to get attention from teachers and it paves the way to develop their personality skills. Correct article usage
the opportunity
For instance
, since youth get healthy
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the healthy
a healthy
the
classmates and it assists to grow good qualities in their lives. Change the word
their
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the adolescent
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be become
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become
have become
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and productive Add an article
a sociable
person
for society.
In conclusion, in my perspective, studying in Fix the agreement mistake
people
classroom
atmosphere with lecturers is the best way to gain educational achievements rather than computers. Admittedly,online studies have become less productive because of Add an article
a classroom
its
detrimental impacts Correct pronoun usage
their
such
as depression, lethargy and low concentration. Even though institutions and tutors help to overcome these issues by
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