The demand for food is increasing worldwide. Why has it happened? What measures could the international community take to improve the situation?

Today people consume foods more than ever before and
this
desire resume to get larger all around the
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globe
global
. There are some reasons for
this
trend in my
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such
as
population
growth
and economic
growth
in different
pary
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part
of the world.
Nevertheless
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still people and governments of the world are able to stop
this
dramatic
growth
which
i
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will explain in detail in
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the next
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paragraphs.
first
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major reason
of
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for
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expanding
demand
for
food
can be the soaring
population
swell.
Recent
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era with all of its
improvments
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improvements
caused a large raise
on
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the
world
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inhabitants.
As a
result
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indivisuals
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individuals
need various sort of sources for feeding themselves and
this
lead
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them to
demanding
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demand
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a higher amount of
foods
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food
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. Another main cause may be economic
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climb
clip
clime
.
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Fortunately
, nowadays many of
countriea
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countries
have
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been reached
to
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a
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economical
growth
. As
this
sort of
improvments
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improvements
improvement
brings wealth for citizens of that developing countries too;
therefore
, when
poeple
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people
have enough money they will spend more on buying more foods and
paralerly
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parallelly
they will increase the
food
demant
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demand
also
.
However
,
also
there are remedies for decreasing the soring
demand
of
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for
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food
.
Firstly
, governments are
responsibly
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could decrease
the
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apply
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food
consumption
with
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by
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controling
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controlling
the
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apply
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population
growth
. Authorities may lessen the
food
desire
with
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by
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monitoring the
countries
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country's
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population
,
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apply
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if there will be a
controled
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controlled
number of
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apply
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population
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the population
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the
demand
for
food
would decrease. Take
Indian
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the Indian
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population
for
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,for
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instance,
indians
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tend to eat three times a day wich considering the number of citizens of
india
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India
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the
deman
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demand
of
food
in their
contry
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country
is
also
high. Another remedy can be informing individuals
for
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consuming
limited
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a limited
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amount of
food
.
In other
words
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government can decrease the
demand
with
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by
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teaching them on TV or
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in schooles
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schooles
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schools
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for consuming enough amount of
food
. in conclusion, urging for different cuisines
is become
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becomes
has become
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greater in every corner of
this
globe. considering the
reasones
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reasons
of
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for
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this
trend
such
as
population
expand
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expansion
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and economic
improvments
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improvements
, there are some simple steps for overcoming
to
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apply
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this
problem
also
such
as informing people and
contoling
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controlling
consoling
the
population
growth
.
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