Children can learn effectively by watching television. Therefore they should be encouraged to watch television regularly at home and at school. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Kids

will have the ability to learn more effectively by watching TV and should

therefore

be more encouraged to watch more of it regularly at their private

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or at school. In

this

essay, I will explain why I do not agree with

this

statement.

Firstly

, letting children watch television more often in their own home or in other places should not be encouraged. One of the reasons for

this

is that producing youngsters with too many movies or tv shows will have a negative effect on them when they become older.

For instance

, in China, they have banned all

kids

under 15 years of age from watching TV,

this

is since experts

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done studies that showed that younger

viewers

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eyes are more sensitive and will be harmed in the process of staring at the screen.

As a result

, these

kids

will require glasses when they get older since their vision got

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cause of

this

.

Secondly

,

kids

will have a higher chance of learning more from reading a book or

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to their

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surrounding

surroundings

. There

also

are younger people that are more capable of taking in new information and knowledge than when they are older in age.

For example

, a study from 2008 that was done in Canada showed that from the ages 1 to 8 years old, children have proven to learn new subjects in school by listening to their teacher and

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questions.

In addition

to that, has shown that in later years increased the amount of

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that ended up graduating. In conclusion, there are better options for younger individuals when it comes to

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new information rather

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staring at a screen. In saying

this

, I still do not agree with the statement above and feel that teaching children to read and talk will benefit them better.