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Some people says that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people thinks that advertising is so common that we no longer to pay attention to it. Discuss both sides of view and give your own opinion.

#people #attention
The maps illustrate the differences
of
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between
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 the
city
 hospital in the north of
city
road
 during 3 years from 1000 to 3999. The most significant change is that the bus top on
boths
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both
 sides of the
road
 was converted
to
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bus
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a bus
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 station connecting
city
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the city
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road
 and
city
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the city
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 hospital, which really benefits the transportation. What's more, the car park in front of the hospital was changed from public and staff
areas
 to staff
areas
, apart from public
areas
 in the east of the hospital. Another big change is the crossing which became
roundabout
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a roundabout
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, making the transportation more orderly. Meanwhile, there's something
reamined
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remained
remind
 the same.
Although
 the
areas
 served
for
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hospital
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the hospital
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 were enlarged, the hospital
reamined
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remained
 the same size.
Also
, it is still surrounded by a riding
road
.
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To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).

For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:

  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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