Nature has a more significant impact on human adult intelligence than nurture. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some
people
believe that human adult intelligence is most influenced by nature than nurture. It disagrees that inherited characteristics affect
people
more than nurture and surroundings.
This
essay will discuss learning from others’ behaviour and the notable effect of an ambient environment as the main reasons.
First
and foremost, from childhood
people
imitate others’ manners. In the future,
people
in
this
situation will behave the way the person from whom they learned it behaved. To support an empiricist theory Albert Bandura’s social learning theory was made in 1977. It is called the Bodo doll experiment and it was concluded that aggression is learned from the environment through observation and imitation. Learning is not what genes say,
thus
from
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others are affecting
people
’s actions. On top of that, sometimes some of the characteristics can change under the influence of the environment.
This
was
also
scientifically proved by the experiment called “The Twins in Early Development Study”.
This
study was conducted like
this
: identical twins grew up in different environments. According to the study, by observing changes it was found out some genes that were
identical
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before the study changed and
behavior
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has differed too.
Therefore
, it is obvious that every person is affected by nurture. To conclude, different studies came to the conclusion that nurture has an enormous effect on a person’s
intelligence
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way
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of thinking.
Thus
,
nurture
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should be considered in developing inborn skills.
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