Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays, the environmental problem become a big impact on our society which lead to discussion. Some
people
say that the main effects are animals
and plants extinct soon while others think that there are more necessary environmental consequences. According to these arguments, I will illustrate both views and the reasons.
First
of all, losing the
particular Correct article usage
a
species
of plants and animals
will affect the ecosystem. If there are no producers like trees so animals
will lose their habitats to live and hide from predators. Besides
, some animals
rely on herbs which are their main foods. When the number of prey are decreasing, it not
enough for predators. Add a missing verb
is not
Consequently
, the animals
will not live as long as before, also
the food chain will get destroyed. The extinction of animals
will start then
the new generation Replace the word
than
people
will never see it. Change preposition
of people
For example
, if the seaweed are
not exist so the fish will not have a settlement and food which lead to the number of decrease in some Change the verb form
is
species
.
On the other hand
, some people
think that the main environmental issue is global warming. In today’s society, the world became warmer because of
Change preposition
apply
people
destroyed the environmental properties by throwing trash on the roads and oceans, using more cars, burning the forests and etc. These problems can cause various effects to
Change preposition
on
people
lives Change noun form
people's
such
as health issues, poverty, and an increase in drought. Moreover
, it can lead to the loss of animal species
as well. For instance
, when the temperature are
extremely hot Change the verb form
is
which
Correct pronoun usage
it
make
the crops Correct subject-verb agreement
makes
are
hard to grow. Unnecessary verb
apply
However
, the farmer will lose income.
In summary, both of
views can cause Change preposition
apply
the
large effects Correct article usage
apply
to
our world. In my perspective, I think that these two ideas are the same issue. Change preposition
on
The global
warming is Correct article usage
Global
the
comprehensive problem that Correct article usage
a
cause
the Change the verb form
causes
lose
of plants and Replace the word
loss
animals
Change the noun form
animal
species
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