Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays, the environmental problem become a big impact on our society which lead to discussion. Some
people
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say that the main effects are
animals
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and plants extinct soon while others think that there are more necessary environmental consequences. According to these arguments, I will illustrate both views and the reasons.
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of all, losing
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particular
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of plants and
animals
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will affect the ecosystem. If there are no producers like trees so
animals
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will lose their habitats to live and hide from predators.
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, some
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rely on herbs which are their main foods. When the number of prey are decreasing, it
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enough for predators.
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, the
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will not live as long as before,
also
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the food chain will get destroyed. The extinction of
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will start
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then
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the new generation
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people
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will never see it.
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, if the seaweed
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not exist so the fish will not have a settlement and food which lead to the number of decrease in some
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.
On the other hand
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, some
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think that the main environmental issue is global warming. In today’s society, the world became warmer because
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people
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destroyed the environmental properties by throwing trash on the roads and oceans, using more cars, burning the forests and etc. These problems can cause various effects
to
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people
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lives
such
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as health issues, poverty, and an increase in drought.
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, it can lead to the loss of animal
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as well.
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, when the temperature
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extremely hot
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it
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make
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the crops
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hard to grow.
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, the farmer will lose income. In summary, both
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views can cause
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large effects
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our world. In my perspective, I think that these two ideas are the same issue.
The global
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warming is
the
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comprehensive problem that
cause
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causes
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the
lose
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loss
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of plants and
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animals
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animal
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species
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • biodiversity
  • extinction
  • habitat loss
  • ecosystem
  • food chain
  • imbalance
  • interconnected
  • climate change
  • pollution
  • personal actions
  • policy changes
  • education
  • awareness
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