In many countries household waste e.g food packaging is increasing day by day.What are the reasons ? How can this problem be solved

Eating
behavior
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and tight schedule at work are strongly related to household
waste
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in
food
packaging garbage. In most
of
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countries
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the countries
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, rubbish related to
food
packaging is climbing
along
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the time.
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essay will discuss
about
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the reasons behind
this
issue and the possible solution for it. Modernisation change
people
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attitude especially related to their eating behaviours particularly due to
tight
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schedule at
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the workplaces
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workplaces
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.
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because due to
this
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circumstances, individuals prefer
the
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practical things
especially
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for their eating choices
such
as fast
foods
that have been wrapped easily.
Moreover
, busy schedules make
people
do
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not have enough time to eat, so individuals tend to pick packaged
foods
that are very practical for their conditions.
For instance
, most of the youngsters in big cities
such
as Jakarta prefer fast
food
such
as dim sum as their favourite lunch menu as it is easy to eat and already contained in the place so they do not need to prepare another plate.
Hence
,
this
habit will increase the rubbish from packaged
foods
but
in contrast
manage
people
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time owing to its effectiveness. Government regulation related to
food
packaging may decrease the usage of
this
type of
food
containers
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container
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.
That is
because by limiting the utilization of packaged
foods
,
people
has
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to bring their own
equipments
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equipment
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such
as lunch box so the garbage from packaged
foods
will go down considerably.
Additionally
, using private eating
equipments
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equipment
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is more friendly to the environment as it can decrease the rubbish from
food
containers
or plastics that are
also
the source of
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greenhouse
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green house
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greenhouse
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emission
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emissions
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.
For example
, in several restaurants in Jakarta, buyers have to bring their own boxes if
people
want to buy certain
food
products, so the residual
waste
from the package will go down significantly.
Thus
, government rule in
food
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the food
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industry
play
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a crucial role in decreasing the usage of
food
containers
. To sum up, eating
behavior
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behaviour
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relating to tight schedules influence
people
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people's
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choice of packaged
foods
and increase the
waste
from
those kind
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of
foods
.
Authorities
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regulation
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regulations
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that
limit
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the use of
food
packaging and
motivate
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motivates
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individuals to prepare their own
food
containers
may give
remarkable
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a remarkable
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reduction in
waste
product
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products
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from
food
packaging.
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