ZDeveloped countries have created many environmental problems in the world, particularly in thier contribution to global warming. Why is global warming a problem? What can be done to reduce the dangers of global warming?

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nowadays, there are many developed countries around the world that these countries can affect global warming,
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essay will explain why
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has become a problem and how we can solve it.
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, global warming becomes a problem that has many effects on the environment,
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, not only is a threat to all the people but
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wants to hurt the earth,
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, these are lead to clearing ice in south pole and the north pole and ,in overall,
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is lead to change ecosystem and ,definitely, want to affect in our life as well as we can see many different of industry and factory that it is created smoke,
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, with an increasing number of transportation we should be waited for consequence,
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, today, we can see many different vehicles than before that want to be a reason for global warming. There are many solutions for
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matter one of them and the most important of them we can lower the number of vehicles or we can
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different fuel that does not has any negative effects,
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, we can
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electric cars rather than another car that wants petrol or gas
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we can
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of the bicycle for short path,
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, we can lower
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of the warmer device and rather than we can wear Proper clothing. In conclusion, people should control their warming consumption,
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, We will definitely not have a good future, and
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problem wants to become a crisis for future generations.
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