Some people believe famous people's support towards international aid organizations draws the attention to problems, while others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays,
people
have contention over whether celebrities
' support towards
international Change preposition
for
aid
organizations raises public awareness of the problems
. In my point of view, celebrities
make the problem less important as they tend to distract people
from real social issues.
Some people
argue that people
who hold high social status and who receive public recognition are more powerful in drawing public attention
. If they support international aid
organisations through fundraising or celebrity endorsement, a profound impact will be exerted over
the general public. Change preposition
on
For example
, fans and followers will start imitating their act
by initiating donating or volunteering events for the organisation. Replace the word
actions
Such
acts will help the international aid
organisations source personnel and capital from different parts of the world, which leads to the social problems
being addressed in an efficient way.
On the other hand
, some people
believe that celebrities
' support will distract people
's attention
from the real issue, and I agree with this
idea. This
is because most celebrities
act out their role as social benefactors. They see speaking for international aid
organisations as a chance for self-branding. They do this
without giving serious consideration to how the problems
could be better solved through their own power and status. In this
case, they tend to put emphasis on branding themselves. They could also
misrepresent the truth or provide band-aid
solutions to complex problems
. For example
, the public statement against racism does not provide practical solutions in real life. As a consequence, attention
is drawn by celebrities
and their views, while few people
care about the real problems
behind
.
In conclusion, I hold the idea that Correct pronoun usage
thembehind
celebrities
make the problems
less important. Although
they are powerful in getting public attention
in a short period of time, people
are likely to be misguided by their views instead
of the fact, leading to the consequence that little attention
is given to the real social problems
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