some people say patriotism causes problems and is negative overall. others feel that it is beneficial for society at large. Do you advantages of patriotism outweigh its disadvantages?
Patriotism is one's passion , pride, devotion, attachment and
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essay will explore the causes the pros and cons of Linking Words
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, a sense of honesty encourages nations to understand themselves and to be kind to the community. Linking Words
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, a year ago , an unfortunate situation occurred in our homey. The Cordoba dam in our country has been damaged , Linking Words
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resulted in the distraction of many places and affected negatively the population's life . In these difficult times , all of our society tried to help them as much as they could . Linking Words
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, fanaticism is the basis of national identity which helps to preserve nations' culture , traditions and customs as well as to be proud of the country's history. It is known from history that our bucolic has produced many great scholars . Their work is widely used today in various fields . their devotion and discoveries are an example for us and create a sense of Linking Words
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, there is one step from fanaticism to fanaticism . nationalism can result in horrible forms of jingoism . Linking Words
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, in turn , leads to various misunderstandings between people . Linking Words
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, nationalism leads to the deterioration of relations between populations as well as between different countries and has a negative effect on their economies . To sum up , taking everything into consideration that Linking Words
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they have their downsides , they can not outweigh their positives.Linking Words
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