People are wearing western-style clothes rather than more traditional clothes. Why is this? Is it a negative or positive development?

It is increasingly common nowadays that young people in my country

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Jeans and Sneakers

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of traditional Qipao and cloth shoes, which are traditional Chinese

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essay, I will discuss how

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western dressing style becomes mainstream in many

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and why

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is a worrying

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. One of the main causes of traditional

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being replaced by western ones is

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widespread of western

cultures

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across the globe. In today’s globalized world, consumers nowadays have increased access to products from other parts of the world. By exporting consumer goods, western countries disseminate their

cultures

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to developing

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.

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trend

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has accelerated over the

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few decades when western cultural products emerged in these

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particularly

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those in Asia. Good examples include Hollywood films, the NBA and French fashion magazines. These inevitably appeal

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great many young people in modern cities who embrace novelty.

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, they opt to follow western trends of dressing, thereby gradually reshaping the dressing style

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nationwide.

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western

clothes

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suit modern lifestyles more than traditional ones,

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poses a threat to

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cultures

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of host countries. As an indispensable element of traditional culture,

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play a vital role in cultural identity. Without

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way of exposure to their ancestral culture on a daily basis, children will lose

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a valuable chance to interact with

traditions

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the traditions

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, religions and

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identity of their nation. It is highly likely that they will not consider national

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important to their self-identity and keep

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notion when they grow into adulthood.

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, if traditional dressing styles fade in a society, the primacy of traditional culture will inevitably be overlooked. In conclusion, as western

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have been popularized worldwide, people are heavily influenced and ignore their national

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.

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undermines the preservation of traditional

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in many

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and should be reversed with measures taken by governments.