People are wearing western-style clothes rather than more traditional clothes. Why is this? Is it a negative or positive development?

It is increasingly common nowadays that young people in my country
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Jeans and Sneakers
instead
of traditional Qipao and cloth shoes, which are traditional Chinese
clothes
. In
this
essay, I will discuss how
this
western dressing style becomes mainstream in many
nations
and why
this
is a worrying
trend
. One of the main causes of traditional
clothes
being replaced by western ones is
the
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widespread of western
cultures
across the globe. In today’s globalized world, consumers nowadays have increased access to products from other parts of the world. By exporting consumer goods, western countries disseminate their
cultures
to developing
nations
.
This
trend
has accelerated over the
last
few decades when western cultural products emerged in these
nations
particularly
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those in Asia. Good examples include Hollywood films, the NBA and French fashion magazines. These inevitably appeal
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great many young people in modern cities who embrace novelty.
As a result
, they opt to follow western trends of dressing, thereby gradually reshaping the dressing style
in
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the
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nationwide.
Although
western
clothes
suit modern lifestyles more than traditional ones,
this
trend
poses a threat to
traditional
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cultures
of host countries. As an indispensable element of traditional culture,
clothes
play a vital role in cultural identity. Without
this
way of exposure to their ancestral culture on a daily basis, children will lose
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such
a valuable chance to interact with
traditions
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, religions and
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identity of their nation. It is highly likely that they will not consider national
cultures
important to their self-identity and keep
this
notion when they grow into adulthood.
Therefore
, if traditional dressing styles fade in a society, the primacy of traditional culture will inevitably be overlooked. In conclusion, as western
cultures
have been popularized worldwide, people are heavily influenced and ignore their national
clothes
.
This
trend
undermines the preservation of traditional
cultures
in many
nations
and should be reversed with measures taken by governments.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Globalization
  • cultural exchange
  • modernity
  • versatility
  • practicality
  • Western media
  • fashion industry
  • widespread adoption
  • professional settings
  • preservation
  • cultural diversity
  • cultural integration
  • cross-cultural understanding
  • unique cultural identities
  • expression of individuality
  • innovative
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