Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The developments of a

country

are an important issue for the citizens to discuss

either

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whether

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the

economic

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economy

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should be considered to be

improve

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or other types of

progress

.

This

essay will examine both viewpoints and

also

give my personal view. There are several kinds of improvement the

governments

should play a huge role in, and the

economic

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is one of them. The

progress

in

economic

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economics

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can provide humankind

numerous

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with numerous

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benefits. The

first

of which is a great amount of income to the

country

that the

governments

can run the

country

by allocating money for other aspects of development. The reason is

because

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if the

economic

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of the

country

is growing, it means the investors are willing to invest in the

country

.

As a result

, it leads to an

increase

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rate of employment which the citizens are beneficial from it.

For example

,

people

are employed because

the

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international businesses are encouraged to be built from the

governments’

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government’s

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goal

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goals

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.

On the other hand

, some

people

say that other types of

progress

are equally important to be taken into account, and medical care is

also

a serious argument. Due to the growth in

a

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the

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number of the old, many old

people

have chronic health issues that have not been discovered the medicine for or do not have enough aid

kit

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kits

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because of a lack of the resources. The

governments

can be responsible for

this

crucial problem by supplying the

necessity

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tools for professionals to help those

people

effectively.

For instance

, in Germany, doctors can access

to

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apply

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many advancing machines for operating. In conclusion,

the

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economic

progress

is significant for the population.

However

, there are various conceivable kinds of development that the government can serve

to

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the citizens. In my opinion, I think the

governments

should consider many other aspects of the development in order to run the

country

proficiently.