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People today sleep less and less. What are causes of this? Do you think this is a positive development?

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In recent times, we have seen numerous late-night activities
such
 as overtime working, gamings night, and watching series.
This
 kind of activity has led many individuals to spend less
time
 sleeping. In my opinion, I disagree with us spending less and less
time
 sleeping. As in
this
 passage, I will provide you with information on the causes and the negative impact of these
behaviors
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. The causes of people spending less
time
 sleeping can have two main factors.
Firstly
 is the trend of modern-day work habits. Many entrepreneurs have usually told us that “sleeping for 8 hours is more than enough, you should spend that
time
 working”.
Secondly
, because of various technological entertainment we possess.
for instance
, we have seen many children and young adults stay up late playing video games, or many individuals who watch series past through the night.
Moreover
, staying up late,or spending less
time
 sleeping
also
 contains downside as well.
First
 of all, even -though many entrepreneurs have encouraged us to spend less
time
on
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sleeping.
However
, there have been many
reported
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 about don't having enough sleep might
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effect
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 your performance
on
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works
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.
Finally
, don't
having
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 enough sleep may lead to
further
 help issues
such
 as stress,heart disease, etc.
This
 is why I believe that spending less
time
 sleeping is a negative development. In conclusion, as we have seen the causes ,
in
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 why people spend less and less
time
sleep
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. I can ensure that
this
 trend will continue to rise in the upcoming future. That's may lead to health problems in the future as well.
This
 is why
,
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 we need to
between
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be mindful
to
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 our
body
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 and maintain
a healthy sleeping habits
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a healthy sleeping habit
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.
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