you live in a room in college. there is a problem in the bathroom that you would like it to be repaired. write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. in the letter describe the problem explain how the situation affects you suggest a time when repairman could visit

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sir/madam, I am writing
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inform

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you regarding a problem in the college
room
. I am sanu and l am living in college accommodations in
room
number 18 b block. There are some problems in the bathroom shower are licking and
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face problems
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the bath time.
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am taking a bath morning time
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i
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saw the bathroom shower are licking and all the
bathroom
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bathrooms

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are full
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water
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situation because
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difficult to stand there and take shower.
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, you will inform the
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repairman

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and solve
this
problem.Because it is big problem I never face
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them

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. You will ask the technician to come
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the
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room
6
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.pm because
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will be free and
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will in the
room
and all the daily schedules are completed. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
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you, Your sincerely' Dharma
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