you live in a room in college. there is a problem in the bathroom that you would like it to be repaired. write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. in the letter describe the problem explain how the situation affects you suggest a time when repairman could visit

Daer
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Dear
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sir/madam, I am writing
this
letter to
imfrom
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inform
you regarding a problem in the college
room
. I am sanu and l am living in college accommodations in
room
number 18 b block. There are some problems in the bathroom shower are licking and
i
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I
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face problems
in
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during
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the bath time.
Moreover
,
i
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I
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am taking a bath morning time
than
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then
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i
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I
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saw the bathroom shower are licking and all the
bathroom
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are full
by
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of
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water
and
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apply
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afterthat
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after that
I don't take a bath
this
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in this
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situation because
it
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difficult to stand there and take shower.
Furthermore
, you will inform the
repair man
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repairman
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and solve
this
problem.Because it is big problem I never face
tham
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them
. You will ask the technician to come
in
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to
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the
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apply
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room
6
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at 6
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.pm because
this
time
i
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I
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will be free and
i
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I
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will in the
room
and all the daily schedules are completed. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Thanks
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you, Your sincerely' Dharma
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