you live in a room in college. there is a problem in the bathroom that you would like it to be repaired. write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. in the letter describe the problem explain how the situation affects you suggest a time when repairman could visit

Daer

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Dear

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sir/madam, I am writing

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letter to

imfrom

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inform

you regarding a problem in the college

room

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. I am sanu and l am living in college accommodations in

room

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number 18 b block. There are some problems in the bathroom shower are licking and

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face problems

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during

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the bath time.

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am taking a bath morning time

than

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then

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saw the bathroom shower are licking and all the

bathroom

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bathrooms

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are full

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water

and

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apply

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afterthat

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after that

I don't take a bath

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this

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in this

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situation because

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difficult to stand there and take shower.

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, you will inform the

repair man

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repairman

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and solve

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problem.Because it is big problem I never face

tham

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them

. You will ask the technician to come

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the

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room

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at 6

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.pm because

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time

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will be free and

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will in the

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and all the daily schedules are completed. I am looking forward to hearing from you soon.

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you, Your sincerely' Dharma

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May 14, 2022

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